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Tards on a Bus

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OMG I DID IT! :dummy:
Sorry ~Kriku for being like a year late or so :paranoid:

So. It's a bus full of tards looking at you as they go by! :dummy:
It's based on what we used to do in trams - every time one came from the opposite direcion, we would wave to all the people staring out of their windows.

Of course then we grew up and it got kind of awkward but I promised to make an emote out of it :lol:

It's not very much different from the original idea and i'm really satisfied with how it came out and that I finally finished :paranoid:


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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

'KAY. CRITIQUE TIEMS. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la"/>

Positives first, as always.
The expressions on the emotes are priceless. I rofl'd when I saw it in my devwatch. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g…" width="17" height="15" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle"/>
The way they're aligned next to each other is great. luffluffluff.
Also love the blank bus driver. He's my favorite. Aditional roflshim.
Love the emote shading, especially on the green emote. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" title="Nod"/>
Great pixeling on the bus, and I love how it bounces lightly as it moves. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" title="Nod"/>

Now negative tiems.
The blank bus driver is turning constantly. The bus is driving straight and the wheels don't move left or right. Odd. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":B" title="Bucktooth"/>
The bus itself--I can't really see the shading on it. I see maybe two pixels near the back, but that's about it. If you want to shade isometric, it's best to pick a midtone, a darker color, and a lighter color, and make sure it's visible against each other (I think that's how you tried to shade anyway, can't really see).
Also. The wheels start and stop moving a lot. That'd be fine if the bus stopped shaking when the wheels stopped turning, but that's not how it works. Seems strange to me.
Also, the orange paranoid has one eye smaller than the other, which bugs the hell out of me. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":B" title="Bucktooth"/>

Overall, it's alright. You need to work on the animation and effects a lot more, though. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" title="Nod"/> I personally thing it'd work as a static, but that's just me. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="15" height="15" alt=":lol:" title="LOL"/>